Some lines of "THE TRAVELER":

(FRAGMENT)

Sarah walks home

Sarah wait... (Jesse)

I cant live like this... not without him (Sarah crying)

You cannot change the destiny Sarah... (Jesse)

That what i thought yesterday (Sarah)

(END OF FRAGMENT)

(FRAGMENT)

Wait... (Sarah)

Sarah... we already talk about this You already gave me your answer and i have to go (Kyle)

Dont take that flight... (Sarah crying)

Why? (Kyle)

Because... (knowing that he's going to die on that flight) I love you.. (Sarah)

(END OF FRAGMENT)

Hi everyone liker i saw there's a lot of people here that writes story id like to try it myself the only thing i thought so far its the name and the introduction of the story

the story its called "THE TRAVELER" its about to have 13 episodes (10 pages per episode) and here's the introduction:

(voice-over)

Welcome to the core I'm Professor William Connor you have been chosen to be the Traveler...

Imagine that you had the power to change the future

The power to travel to past and fix all the mistakes

The power to solve murders, to avoid catastrophes

What would you do?

You have been chosen

Welcome to this odyssey where your success into the past...

It will change the course of our future

What would you think?

I saw yesterday Halloween the Remake by Rob Zombie and i said... WTF?!?!?!

Its really a disaster you see Halloween franchise dies long ago the best, for me, to see a good Halloween saga, are

Halloween (Carpenter!!!!)

Halloween II

Halloween IV

Halloween: H20 (This not too like it because it was a good script but only 80 minutes too short)

what about you?

Today its born its a girl!!!!!

Mi sister's baby born today name Victoria she so cute

OMG a so happy aunt with my 17 years old im so happy she's beatifull!!!!

For those who like this story the 5 of September can read it

The story is called "5ELECT10N" my friend write stories using the WORD for his free time when his not studying law school and the story its about an alien, with human form, that comes to Earth to pick 30 healthy people (18 women-12 men) to be save from the Judgement Day, the day Mankind will be extinct so that 30 "chosen ones" have the task to repopulate Earth (Its a little based in a mordern-history of "The Ark Of Noe" in some aspect you know the end, the saviour, the ones who save from the flood)

My friend said that for all who wants to read it the Friday would be the release those who want to read it add him to your e-mails br1_venom_luque@hotmail.com